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StoryBrand in Real Life: How to Stop Sounding Like a Marketing Template

September 04, 20251 min read

StoryBrand in Real Life: How to Stop Sounding Like a Marketing Template

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"Your story isn’t a script—it’s a signal. Make sure it sounds like you."- Shannon


Wait—What Is StoryBrand Again? 

Storybrand marketing explained

StoryBrand is a messaging framework built on one idea: your customer is the hero, not your brand.


Why Most People Get It Wrong Here’s the mistake:

 trying to sound like StoryBrand, without living it.

  • Over-templated language

  • Cliché messaging

  • Too much about you, not them

▶️Real Talk: StoryBrand in Action Let’s break down real-world StoryBrand marketing examples:

▶️Before: “Our platform helps you streamline workflow and increase efficiency.”

▶️After: “You’ve got deadlines, client calls, and 10 open tabs. We help you close the loop—faster.”

Related: Your Website Isn’t a Brochure


Tips to Humanize Your Message

 tips & tricks with arrow

  • Use the word "you" more than "we"

  • Define a clear customer problem

  • Offer a plan (not just a pitch)

Helpful Tools for StoryBranding:


Wrap Up: 

Real Talk Connects StoryBrand marketing examples show us that clarity beats clever. Keep it real, focused, and customer-first.

Ready to shift your message from confusing to clear? 

Email us at [email protected] or call 754-465-9066.

Shannon Torres, founder of The Angle Hub, has spent 20+ years turning bold ideas into global marketing wins - from Red Bull mini fridge concept to Kellogg campaigns in the Caribbean. These days, she’s all about helping purpose-driven brands grow with smarts, heart, and zero fluff.

Shannon

Shannon Torres, founder of The Angle Hub, has spent 20+ years turning bold ideas into global marketing wins - from Red Bull mini fridge concept to Kellogg campaigns in the Caribbean. These days, she’s all about helping purpose-driven brands grow with smarts, heart, and zero fluff.

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